Exercise update!

Jess has forwarded the screenplay/script of our 2-minute exercise piece that we will be running over tomorrow afternoon, discussing and altering (if need be). Following this, it will allow Tom and I to get underway with the storyboarding process.

Upon first glance, the script appears to be heading in the right direction we were going for; a fragile person once shaken, and one who struggles to tackle setbacks in his life.

A few alterations I think need to be made, for example the manager Dom I feel should hang up after Matt's penultimate line, creating a more dramatic effect on the main character as well as the audience. Some lines of dialogue could do with tightening up, but apart from that I seem pretty happy with the initial script!